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Steps to Heaven, along with flowers and a majestic sky. The dove is there too. Holy Spirit dwell in my soul.

- Last Letter To My Beloved -

The sorrow must wait
when you face serious life crises
They are going to have good conversations
take care every minute
Share happy memories and sorrows

Life's last hours
they both know it
time is running out
Love without limits
to the end of the world
Words are not necessary
their eyes tell

His last letter:
I want to carry you
up the golden stairs
But you must enter the gate alone
Wait for me ... because I find it difficult
to believe that all the good and
happy moments do not exist anymore

Love can not be owned
and can not be bought either
But you will always own my heart
Every time I breathe,
I love you more

You've made me complete
my light from a fifth direction of heaven
It was you who taught me to love unconditionally
Love is never wrong
Until we meet again, my darling
I love you with all my heart









15.12.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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1st place in the contest
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Babcock Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 12:19 PM
A sad and very touching write. Makes me want to have tears. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:06 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment and friendly visit, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is such a tender, loving, heartfelt write that s from your golden pen. It does touch the heart so deeply, setting the emotions to sing. I do so love reading your poetic gems Anne-Lise. May your pen ever flow gold my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:06 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment and friendly visit, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Such a moving and loving write Anne-Lise and most deserving of your top win! Congrats xxoo
Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:09 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You penned such a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. PS, Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:09 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Such a wonderful poem, Sunshine, congratulations on your win... Have a Merry Christmas.. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:08 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 5:22 PM
You blow me away with this wonderful rendering of the last letter, a deserved winner..
Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:07 AM
- Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Oh! Sunshine that's is so touching you do know how to write poetry my friend!!
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:19 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, my friend Bobby ... glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:05 PM
What can I add here but my warmest congratulations for your superb poem which I have missed because I was away dearest, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:13 PM
- You are here now ... and it means a lot with your congratulations, my friend :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations for you win Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:49 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:27 PM
here again to send you my warmest congrats, anne... you go, girl!...happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:33 PM
- Always nice to see you, Nette ... many thanks for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Back with congrats Anne-Lise..a well deserved first place win.
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:22 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Sometimes sorrow cannot wait, even when we try.. Touching poem Sunshine..Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:17 PM
- It's hard to hide our sorrow, even if we try - Many thanks for my great place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 16, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Love is never wrong, lovely said, wonderful piece for contest. My best to you! xomo
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:20 PM
- Thank you very much, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:03 AM
so so beautiful, you always pull at my heart with these poems!
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:21 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment and friendly visit, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 6:51 PM
so smitten by your heartfelt poem, anne... love is the answer, even after life on earth... huggs
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:19 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Beautifully written Ann-Lise :) Good luck in the contest :)
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:19 PM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 4:18 PM
I enjoyed the tone of your poem and the words that celebrate the life lived together. The photo you posted is the final path to heaven, blessed by an angel..well done Anne-Lise..you wrote a winning poem.
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 12:18 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment and friendly visit, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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