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12/16/18

First Place

'Last latter to my beloved ' Contest by Silent One

Last Letter

                               Oh ! My beloved 
                                 My deepest love!
                   On first romance, we were thrilled,  
                 overwhelmed on glance at solitary stream strand.
                 Both honoured our dormant desire and ardent ardor.
                          Seed of love sprouted.
                     Root of pain pierced young hearts.
                                        Passionate stem was up.
           Two soft tender leaves trembled with eager heart beats
                                             pulsating romance.
                  Wobbling bud of love slowly blossomed spread pearly petals    
                  but our First Date sank in silent dismay.
                       You did not voice, we got separated.
                   We were not united in social status,
                   yet strange emotional string tied us in eternal bond.
                        Reached my last phase and sad to say,
                                not even aware of your whereabouts.
              Neither to justify nor to certify my depth of emotive urge.
                We are quite conscious of amorous glow of our lamp of love.
                   I wish, I ponder, I yearn to send my last letter
                   carrying last errand, my last wish to meet you once.
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Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Thanks n Blessing
La France Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Anisha, so beauifully written with so much love and yearning, and very deserving of that first place win, well done ~
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Thank you Dear Heart.Love
Sands Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations for your win Anisha :)
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:44 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Anisha :) - A beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Hi Anisha, You have penned such a well written poignant piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:04 AM
When we lose someone to death, we will always yearn to meet them again.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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