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Oh my dearest love, how longingly I recall
Amorous wink of joy, teasing zealous eyes
When you held my hand on journey of life
And never let go despite the arduous climb.

Happily you greeted what justly we toiled for,
In view of gratitude plentiful it always was. 
Staying true to hallmark of your own resolve
You didn't falter when fate made bad calls.

Exuberantly you reveled in garden of roses
In purple orchids and fragrance of Jasmine
Beneath cosmic infinity wooing your fantasy,
As resolutely you held on to truth of reality.

We traveled far eying cultural renaissance
In Sistine Chapel and the Statue of David
As museums found you mesmerized by art 
And paintings in Uffizi held you spellbound.

In you honor, I'll memorialize solemn oath
Lovingly etched in the temple of our hearts
Saying in your voice, there are no goodbyes
When love shall endure till the end of time.

December 14, 2018
Placed first in last letter to my beloved contest by Silent One

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Date: 4/24/2019 6:16:00 AM
Superbly composed poetry my great friend.. A fav, a true beauty....
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Date: 1/14/2019 1:38:00 AM
Yes, love shall endure till the end of time, and your poem as well. Beautiful.
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Date: 1/11/2019 11:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! What a Masterpiece!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Chantelle.
Date: 1/10/2019 2:48:00 PM
Nicely written.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Valerie.
Date: 1/8/2019 7:17:00 PM
Beautifully written and it shows the overflow of emotions. Great job Vijay. Keep going. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Swetha.
Date: 1/5/2019 12:55:00 PM
Hello Vijay, I so agree with the last verse. Did you win this contest. This poem is beautifully done. have a nice day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 1/3/2019 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations #8 on the best poem list Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 12/20/2018 8:47:00 AM
Coming back with congratulations on placing first in the contest, Vijay. Before the results came out, it was already a winner in my eyes! On reading it again it merits a fav! Best regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2018 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 12/19/2018 8:56:00 PM
A beautiful letter which expresses the unique quality’s of his beloved!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/20/2018 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 12/19/2018 2:20:00 PM
I reread this lovely tribute just now Vijay. Congratulations on your first placement!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 12/18/2018 3:01:00 PM
Another unsurprising victory, my talented friend, congratulations again...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 12/18/2018 8:08:00 AM
Hi Vijay, congratulationon your win in the contest with this most beautiful write. This write comes from the heart and it touches the heart of the reader so gently. This seems to be a day of tears for me so far my friend. An exceptional write. Emotions singing so gently to me. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Mike..appreciate the FAVE.
Date: 12/17/2018 5:29:00 PM
very well done, Vijay. Congats for the win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 12/17/2018 11:33:00 AM
Vijay, Congratulations on your top win with this wonderfully romantic write !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 12/17/2018 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!Beautiful write
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Kenisha.
Date: 12/16/2018 7:33:00 PM
Your words always hold me so close. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 12/16/2018 12:22:00 PM
i am not surprised with your high win, vijay... sweet congrats, woohoo!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, nette.
Date: 12/16/2018 12:12:00 PM
Hi Vijay, You have penned such a touching and well wtitten piece. It's the kind of love that will stand test of time. Many can relate to this, young and old alike. Congratulations on your first place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:30:00 AM
Another brilliant poem Vijay, you really are a master poet with your great vocabulary.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! I knew this would do well :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 12/15/2018 3:41:00 PM
- A beautiful and touching letter, Vijay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/16/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..you wrote a wonderful poem on this theme. Appreciate the kind words.
Date: 12/15/2018 9:03:00 AM
I smile with the first stanza, great write and imagery.. I didn't know what to write , but you gave me an idea... good luck in the contest.... Soup Mail...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/16/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Eve..appreciate the visit and kind remarks. Got your soup mail.
Date: 12/15/2018 7:35:00 AM
So Beautifully written Vijay, words from the heart. Good luck. Tom.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Your visit and kind remarks are much appreciated.
Date: 12/15/2018 6:03:00 AM
A hymn to love that culminates to its glorification dearest friend, Vijay! A Fav. God bless you!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2018 7:47:00 AM
God bless you my friend.. a treasure to receive your FAVE..many thanks, Demetrios.
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