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Not realizing end Sleeping peacefully Numbed from onset pain Her will stands so strong Slowly passing time Restless moving Heart weakening Holding her style Waiting the hour Mom I say It’s O K Go to sleep I’m here O K Calm Written for Sponsor Gareth James Contest Name Last words to a loved one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/14/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gareth James's contest "Last Words To A Loved One" Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:52:00 AM
unforgettable read; one that shines and really hits the winning records.. CONGRATS!! :) nette
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Date: 1/11/2011 6:02:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your wonderful winning poem in Gareth's great contest my friend.. enjoy your sweet success tonight with luv..
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Date: 1/11/2011 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of gareth, cecil
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Date: 1/11/2011 4:35:00 PM
Letting go is hard, Cecil, but sometimes our loved ones need to hear us say it's OK for them to enter eternal rest. Congratulations on your win in Gareth's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:07:00 PM
Sounds very real.
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