Cecil Hickman Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Last Hours

Not realizing end
Sleeping peacefully
Numbed from onset pain
Her will stands so strong
Slowly passing time

Restless moving
Heart weakening
Holding her style
Waiting the hour

Mom I say
It’s O K
Go to sleep

I’m here
O K

Calm 


Written for

Sponsor Gareth James 
Contest Name Last words to a loved one

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 4:29 AM Congratulations on your win in Gareth James's contest "Last Words To A Loved One" Cecil. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud January 12, 2011 at 12:52 AM unforgettable read; one that shines and really hits the winning records.. CONGRATS!! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 11, 2011 at 6:02 PM Congrats Cecil on your wonderful winning poem in Gareth's great contest my friend.. enjoy your sweet success tonight with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 11, 2011 at 4:52 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of gareth, cecil

Carolyn Devonshire January 11, 2011 at 4:35 PM Letting go is hard, Cecil, but sometimes our loved ones need to hear us say it's OK for them to enter eternal rest. Congratulations on your win in Gareth's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda Milgate January 4, 2011 at 8:07 PM Sounds very real.