Country Girl48 Poet Free verse

Last Hour

The last hour
You took your last breath.
The last hour
You spoke to mom and dad

That last hour
Never got to hear your voice
That last hour
I never got to say goodbye
That last hour
I never got to say, "I love you, bro!"

That last hour
I didn't see you go in your corvette
That last hour
I didn't know you had a gun

That last hour
I was sleeping
Thinking everything's ok
Til I woke up, found out,
YOU WERE GONE!!!!!!!

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Laura Leiser January 13, 2015 at 3:31 PM A sad yet wonderfully written poem. Thanks for sharing. Country Girl48 January 13, 2015 at 3:34 PM Ty, Laura!

Emile Pinet January 13, 2015 at 2:06 PM Very well written with strong emotion tugging at the heart strings. Emile. Country Girl48 January 13, 2015 at 3:34 PM Ty, Emile!