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Last Hour

The last hour You took your last breath. The last hour You spoke to mom and dad That last hour Never got to hear your voice That last hour I never got to say goodbye That last hour I never got to say, "I love you, bro!" That last hour I didn't see you go in your corvette That last hour I didn't know you had a gun That last hour I was sleeping Thinking everything's ok Til I woke up, found out, YOU WERE GONE!!!!!!!

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Date: 1/13/2015 3:31:00 PM
A sad yet wonderfully written poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/13/2015 3:34:00 PM
Ty, Laura!
Date: 1/13/2015 2:06:00 PM
Very well written with strong emotion tugging at the heart strings. Emile.
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Country Girl48
Date: 1/13/2015 3:34:00 PM
Ty, Emile!

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