Russell Sivey Poet Quatrain

Last Days

Within simple days of my twilight years
Daylight shines down on me never to leer
Memories are combined with spirit faced
Glories thus are left without stories placed

Harmonies of my life, leaving all fears
Timelessness opens from over my tears
Lest in the hour of my complete defeat
To my maker is whom I will go meet

Russell Sivey

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Skat A July 4, 2013 at 10:57 AM sad, and deep.......enjoyed............ LOVE* SKAT

April Gabriella June 27, 2013 at 3:28 PM I really like this!

Wilma Neels June 27, 2013 at 1:18 PM This is a beautiful Russell; I especially love how you ended it. Awesome piece and enjoy the weekend ahead ;) Wilma

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2013 at 11:24 AM oh my... this touches me so; your incredible piece soothes the heart and puts me into a state of happiness when time ends... what a riveting work, russell..:) huggs

Pace Ink-U-Script June 27, 2013 at 9:54 AM Oooo...I so love this piece written here Russell.

Anne Rutherford June 27, 2013 at 9:40 AM Wow Russell, This is what I call a keeper!! I wish I had written it. I'm happy that you could see under the words in the poem 'Asunder '.Superb poem going to fav. Anne

Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2013 at 9:24 AM a good ending for your maker will be waiting with open arms, enjoyed this one,... ~always, Linda

Richard Lamoureux June 27, 2013 at 7:41 AM Morning Russell, you are headed in the right direction. It is important to know our final destination is not final. Please see my response to your comment this morning. Have a great day Russell.

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2013 at 5:29 AM Great work that is a testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this one today..Yes, the enemy death is forever lurking waiting his time to take one more saint away..Thanks for reading my work..Sara