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Last Days

Within simple days of my twilight years Daylight shines down on me never to leer Memories are combined with spirit faced Glories thus are left without stories placed Harmonies of my life, leaving all fears Timelessness opens from over my tears Lest in the hour of my complete defeat To my maker is whom I will go meet Russell Sivey

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Skat A

Date: 7/4/2013 10:57:00 AM

sad, and deep.......enjoyed............ LOVE* SKAT

April Gabriella

Date: 6/27/2013 3:28:00 PM

I really like this!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2013 1:18:00 PM

This is a beautiful Russell; I especially love how you ended it. Awesome piece and enjoy the weekend ahead ;) Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2013 11:24:00 AM

oh my... this touches me so; your incredible piece soothes the heart and puts me into a state of happiness when time ends... what a riveting work, russell..:) huggs

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/27/2013 9:54:00 AM

Oooo...I so love this piece written here Russell.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/27/2013 9:40:00 AM

Wow Russell, This is what I call a keeper!! I wish I had written it. I'm happy that you could see under the words in the poem 'Asunder '.Superb poem going to fav. Anne

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2013 9:24:00 AM

a good ending for your maker will be waiting with open arms, enjoyed this one,... ~always, Linda

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2013 7:41:00 AM

Morning Russell, you are headed in the right direction. It is important to know our final destination is not final. Please see my response to your comment this morning. Have a great day Russell.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2013 5:29:00 AM

Great work that is a testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this one today..Yes, the enemy death is forever lurking waiting his time to take one more saint away..Thanks for reading my work..Sara