Last Days

aromatic scent

of baby pink carnations

permeates the air

even as they hang their heads

while dying in their green vase
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Comporozos Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 12:46 AM
A really poetical imagery. Happy to read it.I've posted some tankas and haikus, too. I adore this genre.
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March 11, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Happy to read this here too..just lovely !!
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