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Last Date

Two bottles of wine
A loaf of sour dough bread
And thou...all now gone

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Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2011 at 10:43 PM

LOVE this. Congats on it being in the final round.

Sara Kendrick

March 13, 2011 at 1:31 PM

Congratulations on going through the first round..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 9, 2011 at 3:13 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Linda. Love Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 6, 2011 at 7:07 PM

Congrats Linda on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv.. good luck...

Hathor Ammutlinra

December 27, 2010 at 7:22 AM

Deep senryu King' keep them coming' (LIN~RA)

Suresh Iyer

December 15, 2010 at 8:57 AM

Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India

Wilma Neels

December 13, 2010 at 8:03 PM

And that spells the end and you did it brilliantly Linda ;) enjoyed your write Wilma

Daver Austin

December 12, 2010 at 10:06 AM

I checked out your blog. Sorry, but I'm so dense on financial matters. Didn't mean much to me. However, glad you thought of me. Glad you read my stuff. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM

Nice to hear from u Linda... wonderful blog which I commented on my friend.. hope we will see more of u on Soup... happy holidays to u and your with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

December 10, 2010 at 7:52 PM

oh, wow, I really like this sad little senry, Linda!

Sara Kendrick

December 10, 2010 at 9:58 AM

Congratulations on your work being featured on homepage..Sara

Misty Penton-Leccese

December 9, 2010 at 9:38 PM

I am so happy to see that this one was picked to be featured this week. I love all the images that go through my mind when I read this. Some happy, some sad. In just a few words you have painted so many different pictures in the minds of your readers. I know that I have already commented on this one but I just had to tell you again how much I truly enjoyed this one. Lots of Love, ~Misty~

Daver Austin

December 8, 2010 at 2:49 PM

Congrats on this selection. I see a dismal rooftop, a busted down table and chairs, and, of course, the empty bottles. Read this one before, Linda, but got something different this time. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 9:08 AM

Congratulations Linda on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

December 6, 2010 at 7:35 PM

Nice take off from the Rubiyat! I once won an award for a poem which reads"Old tentmaker you knew the truth that beneath the stars man's stay is indeed finite. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Suresh Iyer

December 3, 2010 at 11:57 AM

that was deep, nice reading

Robert A. Dufresne

November 20, 2010 at 2:56 PM

and THAT my friends,.. is pure poetry. : )

Misty Penton-Leccese

November 20, 2010 at 10:23 AM

I like that you have changed the name of this. It fits so much better. Lots of Love, ~Misty~

Daver Austin

November 20, 2010 at 6:46 AM

"In some secluded rendevous." This is a great Senryu. Didn't intend to rhyme. Ooops! Love, Dave

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 20, 2010 at 6:42 AM

Nice senryu with good images on Last date, Linda

Poet Destroyer A

November 19, 2010 at 9:37 PM

heart breaking Linda..p.d.

Misty Penton-Leccese

November 19, 2010 at 8:35 PM

A very romantic picture you have painted with so few words. Beautifully done. Lots of Love, ~Misty~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Wow Linda what a fantastic re entry into the Soup Pot to present this wonderful and powerful Haiku luv... u have been missed and so happy to see u have returned .... enjoy a happy weekend and be blessed my friend with luv..