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Last Dance

Goodbye soul-digger,the music is done we've reached the heaven on it's peak Wake up little darling, and rest on your feet This is the last hour that we should've missed. Goodbye to our last dance, tomorrow is not ours to hold. Let's cherish each moment like its the end Thank you for the memories that wouldn't fade.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 4/7/2017 2:52:00 PM

...feeling nostalgic so I wanted to visit your first poem:-) So so sad yet quite lovely writing. you are a Big talent with a gorgeous heart Aiyah... this is deeply touching. blessings xxx lynn :-)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/8/2016 8:23:00 AM

That sound tragic, heart wrenching. Well penned.

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 7/26/2015 9:35:00 PM

Nice words

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2014 4:13:00 PM

Hello AiyaH, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, ((especially me)) We are ready to support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, ((in which you my friend are doing perfectly)) I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your ALREADY poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/7/2014 8:16:00 AM

ha ha.. I love this comment ,too!!! =) ..you are crazy!!! ..that' why i loved you eversince i started here...Thank you for having me as one of your friend...my honor!!!! ^__^ ..love lots!! ..mwaH :*

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/6/2014 4:15:00 PM

haha I love this comment

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/6/2014 4:14:00 PM

better late than never :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2014 4:10:00 PM

Hi AiyaH, wow! I noticed, not I, Anne, or Skat, stopped by. I know exactly why. Sometimes, when a poet creates his/her account. They will not show, with the new poets, until they post a first poem. :( Sorry I missed your first poem. However, I will make it up to you. ---- Love the poem, by the way. I like the soul-digger line. I MEAN WOW! WOW! That's keeping it real.... Linda

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/7/2014 9:01:00 AM

a very big treasure woman on this site..WHEW!!!! ..thank you for being so nice to me... i'm flattered..hu hu :'(( ..lol!! ..grrrr!!!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/7/2014 8:57:00 AM

aaaahh.. i feel ashamed ,you know it???..ha ha.. i didn't expect that you will take my message seriously....: ')..i just envy when i saw your message tom y friend's (Keith Narne)poem,.. and i really love your way of welcoming those newbies here in our site... :(( ...but that doesn't mean i didn't like you...so in revenge ( HA HA) ...i went to your page and never been awared to what i found...

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/16/2014 1:11:00 PM

A very nice heartfelt poem read now, my poetess friend. Memories never fade, lovely done. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2013 11:36:00 AM

Welcome to the soup, this is a sweet romantic piece.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2013 12:24:00 PM

If you have time check out some of my poems.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 12:21:00 PM

Thank you again, Richard.. :))

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/3/2013 5:29:00 PM

† I Was Reading About The Atheist Gathering At Her State's Capital; It Made Me Smile Because I Know How Precious Their Unknowing Innocent Hearts *.* I Would Say Better To Believe In Nay Beyound Than, Worship A Demon ˜ A Lot Of People Say Live For The Day And Yes, 'Live For The Day.' ˜ Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's, Touching Feature ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/4/2013 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Johnny ;')