Last Dance

Goodbye soul-digger,the music is done
we've reached the heaven on it's peak
Wake up little darling, and rest on your feet
This is the last hour that we should've missed.


Goodbye to our last dance,
tomorrow is not  ours to hold.
Let's cherish each moment like its the end
Thank you for the memories that wouldn't fade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Marie Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 2:52 PM
...feeling nostalgic so I wanted to visit your first poem:-) So so sad yet quite lovely writing. you are a Big talent with a gorgeous heart Aiyah... this is deeply touching. blessings xxx lynn :-)
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 8:23 AM
That sound tragic, heart wrenching. Well penned.
Mcunu Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Nice words
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Hello AiyaH, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, ((especially me)) We are ready to support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, ((in which you my friend are doing perfectly)) I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your ALREADY poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:16 AM
ha ha.. I love this comment ,too!!! =) ..you are crazy!!! ..that' why i loved you eversince i started here...Thank you for having me as one of your friend...my honor!!!! ^__^ ..love lots!! ..mwaH :*
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:15 PM
haha I love this comment
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:14 PM
better late than never :)
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 4:10 PM
Hi AiyaH, wow! I noticed, not I, Anne, or Skat, stopped by. I know exactly why. Sometimes, when a poet creates his/her account. They will not show, with the new poets, until they post a first poem. :( Sorry I missed your first poem. However, I will make it up to you. ---- Love the poem, by the way. I like the soul-digger line. I MEAN WOW! WOW! That's keeping it real.... Linda
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:01 AM
a very big treasure woman on this site..WHEW!!!! ..thank you for being so nice to me... i'm flattered..hu hu :'(( ..lol!! ..grrrr!!!
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:57 AM
aaaahh.. i feel ashamed ,you know it???..ha ha.. i didn't expect that you will take my message seriously....: ')..i just envy when i saw your message tom y friend's (Keith Narne)poem,.. and i really love your way of welcoming those newbies here in our site... :(( ...but that doesn't mean i didn't like you...so in revenge ( HA HA) ...i went to your page and never been awared to what i found...
Devnath  Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 1:11 PM
A very nice heartfelt poem read now, my poetess friend. Memories never fade, lovely done. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Welcome to the soup, this is a sweet romantic piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 12:24 PM
If you have time check out some of my poems.
Torres Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Thank you again, Richard.. :))
Rhinem Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 5:29 PM
† I Was Reading About The Atheist Gathering At Her State's Capital; It Made Me Smile Because I Know How Precious Their Unknowing Innocent Hearts *.* I Would Say Better To Believe In Nay Beyound Than, Worship A Demon ˜ A Lot Of People Say Live For The Day And Yes, 'Live For The Day.' ˜ Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's, Touching Feature ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ Love John
Torres Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Johnny ;')
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