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Last Dance

Fell in love dancing On a sawdust floor A beauty I'd met In a Texas bar Blue eyes, golden hair The night was made For this romance Two souls adrift Came together Something changed She just smiled Walked away I watched She was Gone 5-9-20 Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/23/2020 7:43:00 PM

Larry, CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/26/2020 2:42:00 PM

Thank you, Janice

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 12:11:00 PM

Your wonderful entry tells a captivating story in this short form Larry. This poem is one of my favorites in this contest! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/26/2020 2:42:00 PM

Thank you, Connie

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 4:17:00 AM

Love the emotions interlaced within this story. Congratulations Larry :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/26/2020 2:42:00 PM

Thank you!

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/22/2020 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations Larry! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge but your beautiful poem successfully caught my attention, well done my friend, Emile.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/22/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for the placement. That is an interesting form..fun to write...Larry