Last Chance

Last Chance Fire! Fire! What can we do? Get everyone out and that includes you What can we save before it’s all gone? I look around frantically, it looks like an exploded bomb The smoke is so thick, the noises so loud Check the boy’s bedrooms the smoke a thick dark cloud. An explosion rings out - the telly has blown A noise above my head, as the glass hits, that it has thrown The heat breathing in is getting too much to bear I want my photographs now anything else I don't care. My boys are out and my husband is pulling at me There is nothing more important there, that I can see They are safe now and I will be too I grab the wireless phone and am outside as the boiler blew Engulfed in red and golden searing flame The air is suddenly cooled and someone asks my name I managed to call the fires service, with my cordless phone There is nothing now worth keeping, except our family home Things can be replaced and thing can be brought new But we cannot replace each other and we found out that was true.
For the "Last Chance Contest" written By Mandy Tams hosted by Kirsten Bruni

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/12/2013 6:01:00 PM
MY Dearest SISTER, Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Family is always first, if YOU have one.I did save all of Lenore's POEMS when I had my fire. 3rd degree burns but I had no Family It was before I joined the SOUP. Great Emotions and sincere thoughts in this Creation.Did YOU Win or is this the one that never posted Winners. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother...Harry
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:59:00 AM
just digging deep in your list. posted on my birthday, like this, a winner too, deserved.
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:07:00 PM
If this is true, I'm glad that you survived. Because your right, when someone dies they cannot be revived. And love is truly where there's heart. Even when we are apart.
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Date: 2/8/2012 6:44:00 PM
Best of luck! This is all very exciting stuff! Always, Laura
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/9/2012 2:17:00 AM
Thanks Laura x
Date: 2/6/2012 1:34:00 PM
An emotional picture..........George
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/9/2012 2:19:00 AM
Thanks George x
Date: 2/6/2012 12:35:00 AM
You sure depicted the panic in a home fire so well, here Mandy! I think I'd have reacted the same way, and what you say here is so true-- we can't replace each other-- I wish you the best in the contest and heehee as for what I was drinking, just plain 'ol water-- want a glass :D?
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/9/2012 2:19:00 AM
thank nikko xx
Date: 2/5/2012 2:14:00 PM
If one's family is safe, that is what is important..Of course, our pets would be a priority.Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:45:00 PM
I am deeply touched by your remarkably beautiful poem. What a great write. I wish you a win in Kirsten Bruni Contest. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:47:00 PM
Indeed. Heart felt piece, Mandy. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:14:00 AM
very truthful pen, home resides in the heart of all the ones you love. possessions can be replaced loved ones can't. lovely write!
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:38:00 AM
you're right, mandy... family and love first!.. love the action and tenderness here..:) winning huggs!
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:11:00 AM
Good luck in the contest Mandy,well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/5/2012 7:56:00 AM
Thanks ann-Lise x
Date: 2/5/2012 6:37:00 AM
I felt the panic....awesome descriptive write Mandy!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/5/2012 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia x
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