Last Chance

people are falling from the sky smog in the air and they can't fly wearing tattered mismatch rags they wallow in plastic bags, waste, and rubbish remains piled high 6/23/2021

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Daniel Turner

Date: 6/23/2021 5:24:00 AM

So much said in so few words. Exceptional poem, Eve.

Gary Radice

Date: 6/23/2021 1:53:00 AM

The situation is getting worse that's for sure Eve. Waste, pollution, homelessness. I may have pulled more from the poem than you intended but it made me think and that has to be good. Cheers - Gary

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/23/2021 1:17:00 AM

Great perspective It is not enough to dump rubbish in the sea. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/23/2021 1:04:00 AM

I think you've seen into the future Eve, the world is becoming a big rubbish tip. Tom