Mark Koplin Poet Rhyme

Last Chance

One by one they seize and plunder your soul
Wailing tormented screams from down below
The vile and fiendish are hovering all around
Gnashing their sharp teeth; fists they pound
Sinister apparitions are shadows in the night
Scratching and clawing with all their might
Careful or soon your path will lead you to them
Life will be futile when they choose to condemn
Run a righteous race or take a potluck chance
Satan's demons will take the lead in your dance
There's time to change your ways before they do
I thought you would heed my warning, if only you knew

October 23, 2020

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John Watt October 27, 2020 at 3:45 PM "Abandon all hope, ye who enter here", as Dante wrote. Better by far to heed the warnings and fight the good fight, as Paul wrote to Timothy. Congrats on your win, Mark ~ John

Paul Callus October 27, 2020 at 1:25 PM Yours is a powerful and expressive warning, Mark! Time to put our house in order! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 1:32 PM Thanks Paul!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 27, 2020 at 10:16 AM Hello Mark Kooplin, Congratulations on your win. Darlene De Beaulieu October 28, 2020 at 10:00 AM Enjoy your day Mark Kooplin. Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:10 PM Thanks Darlene! Have a great day!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 8:38 AM - Congratulations on your win, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:10 PM Thanks Anne!

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2020 at 6:16 AM Congrats Mark on your podium win in Silent One's contest. Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:10 PM Thank you very much!

Loving Kindness October 26, 2020 at 9:26 PM Congratulation on your great placement in the contest. Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:09 PM Thanks, I appreciate that!

Eve Roper October 26, 2020 at 9:00 PM Mark nicely written. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:09 PM Thank you Eve! I appreciate your visit

Unseeking Seeker October 26, 2020 at 8:18 PM Hahaha! Well penned invocation of imaginary fear! Congrats! Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:08 PM Thank you so much!

Michelle Faulkner October 26, 2020 at 7:11 PM Very dark and macabre, congratulations on your win, Mark~ Mark Koplin October 27, 2020 at 12:08 PM Thanks Michelle!

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 26, 2020 at 5:47 PM Congratulations, Mark. Agree with this line - "I thought you would heed my warning, if only you knew". Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 5:50 PM Thanks Malabika! I appreciate the visit!

Newton Ranaweera October 26, 2020 at 5:26 PM A great write!! Congratulations on your number 2 win, Mark!! Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 5:49 PM Thank you Newton!

Alexis Y. October 26, 2020 at 10:47 AM Hi Mark, I agree with Silent One‘s comment! Well done. Congratulations your on your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day-Alexis Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 4:31 PM Thank you so much! Enjoy your day as well.

Silent One October 26, 2020 at 9:10 AM The greatest trick the devil ever played was making people think he did not exist... Congratulations on your placement.. Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 9:45 AM I would have to agree, thank you for your generous placement!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 25, 2020 at 12:34 PM Hello Mark Kooplin, Some people do have a last chance to do something right. But it does not always turn our right. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 26, 2020 at 3:22 PM Hello mark Kooplin, enjoy your evening my friend. Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 9:44 AM Thanks Darlene enjoy your day!

Tom Cunningham October 23, 2020 at 10:46 AM There's enough warnings in the good book, ignore them at your peril. Tom Mark Koplin October 23, 2020 at 5:46 PM Absolutely Tom! Thanks for stopping by my friend! have a great night!!

Jenna Logan October 23, 2020 at 9:12 AM No potluck dinners will I share with the Devil. Your warning should be heeded by everyone, Mark. Mark Koplin October 26, 2020 at 9:43 AM Amen sister