Last Call

I'll change my star sign A thousand times, what's one more? It shines through summertime Frozen, recoiled and glacial Take a shot into the light And melt yourself a river Guilt is shattered inside This glass shouldn't be worrisome Help rebuild my penitency Measured advances in moments Last call, I'm imperative But my scales are nearly broken Autunm appears threatening First of all, of a good time But also a missed opportunity

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/6/2025 11:41:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.