Last Call

I'll change my star sign
A thousand times, what's one more?
It shines through summertime

Frozen, recoiled and glacial
Take a shot into the light
And melt yourself a river

Guilt is shattered inside
This glass shouldn't be worrisome
Help rebuild my penitency

Measured advances in moments
Last call, I'm imperative
But my scales are nearly broken

Autunm appears threatening
First of all, of a good time
But also a missed opportunity

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/6/2025 11:41:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.