Larry Bradfield Poet Monorhyme

Last Call

Last call, it's closin' time, my friend -
I guess this heart may never mend
Once more I'll let my elbow bend
Before I face that cold north wind

Last call, it's your last time to blend
I'm at home in this bar you tend
Thanks for the ear you always lend
Hope I said nothin' to offend

She said my graveside she'd attend
But not a teardrop would she spend
My obituary's been penned
And she'll be glad to see my end

So it's this bar that I commend
The service here I recommend
And for the future I contend
Someday my ways I may amend

2/7/2017

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Jan Allison February 19, 2017 at 4:40 PM Many congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues February 18, 2017 at 9:08 PM Very nice, Larry! Congrats! Larry Bradfield February 18, 2017 at 10:19 PM Thank you kindly, Kim!!..Larry

Eve Roper February 18, 2017 at 6:24 PM Very good Monorhyme, Larry, congratulations on your 3rd place win :) hug Eve Larry Bradfield February 18, 2017 at 10:18 PM Thank you, Eve..it was a fun contest

Daniel Turner February 7, 2017 at 10:44 PM I doubt it, Larry:) Make a good country song. Larry Bradfield February 8, 2017 at 10:38 PM I doubt it, too, Daniel! Hadn't thought about a country song, hmm. Thanks for your comments!!..Larry