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Last Call

Last call, it's closin' time, my friend - I guess this heart may never mend Once more I'll let my elbow bend Before I face that cold north wind Last call, it's your last time to blend I'm at home in this bar you tend Thanks for the ear you always lend Hope I said nothin' to offend She said my graveside she'd attend But not a teardrop would she spend My obituary's been penned And she'll be glad to see my end So it's this bar that I commend The service here I recommend And for the future I contend Someday my ways I may amend 2/7/2017

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Date: 2/19/2017 4:40:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/18/2017 9:08:00 PM
Very nice, Larry! Congrats!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/18/2017 10:19:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Kim!!..Larry
Date: 2/18/2017 6:24:00 PM
Very good Monorhyme, Larry, congratulations on your 3rd place win :) hug Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/18/2017 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Eve..it was a fun contest
Date: 2/7/2017 10:44:00 PM
I doubt it, Larry:) Make a good country song.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/8/2017 10:38:00 PM
I doubt it, too, Daniel! Hadn't thought about a country song, hmm. Thanks for your comments!!..Larry

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