Last Call

The last-call lights flickered once more
A warning sign she chose to ignore
Her soul, just like her pocketbook
Was as empty as inside the glass she looked

The bartender said, “Lass, you now must leave”
As she wiped her tears on a tattered sleeve
With no place left in the world to go
She ventured out in the freshly fallen snow

The beauty that she once wore with pride
Had long ago shriveled up and died inside
Her vanity had taken its high priced toll
Leaving behind a lost and lonely soul

Girls who were much less popular than she
Now bask in a love life of prosperity
While she is a smile in many a lad’s past
The less frivolous girls have had the last laugh

Now her love is something she can’t give away
None of the men she devoured elected to stay
That pint she just drained with her last sip
Is the only thing left willing to touch her lips

Her lights flickered their own last call
As she ached for some more alcohol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/4/2012 6:28:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:42:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:50:00 AM
Pitifully sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:22:00 AM
Way to go Joe. Well done.
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:58:00 AM
Oh Joe - you are on a roll. This one is full of heartache; makes my soul cry. There is not enough booze can fill this emptiness. well done. Kathy
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Date: 4/15/2012 3:38:00 PM
a sad tale, but very well-rhymed. nice one!
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Date: 4/14/2012 10:59:00 PM
I agree with the powerful delivery mentioned by Deborah!! You had me captivated from the beginning, I didn't want it to end.. Good work Joe!!..:JP]
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Date: 4/14/2012 10:55:00 PM
Wow! such power in your delivery...you've spun a sad tale Joe... best wishes in the contest!! big hugs,love deb-- Well Done!
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