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Last Breath

My last breath will turn our life into dust particles blowing through your silky fingertips 7/14/2017
Inspired by: prompt "like dust" 15 words exactly

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Date: 7/26/2017 10:42:00 PM
Wow...in few words so much is said. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/26/2017 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jeremy. Janice
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Date: 7/19/2017 1:39:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/19/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thanks, Funom :) Your comments are always so great!!
Date: 7/16/2017 7:18:00 PM
Lovely writing, I especially loved the last line.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/16/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea ;)
Date: 7/16/2017 5:58:00 AM
Nicely penned Jeremy
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/16/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you again, Joseph :)
Date: 7/15/2017 6:27:00 PM
Nicely done, Jeremy. Good luck.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/15/2017 6:32:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel :) I hope it does well!!

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