Last Breath

My last breath will turn our life into dust particles blowing through your silky fingertips 7/14/2017
Inspired by: prompt "like dust" 15 words exactly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Wow...in few words so much is said. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jeremy. Janice
Makama Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:39 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Thanks, Funom :) Your comments are always so great!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Lovely writing, I especially loved the last line.
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Andrea ;)
May Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Nicely penned Jeremy
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Thank you again, Joseph :)
Turner Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Nicely done, Jeremy. Good luck.
Smith Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Thanks, Daniel :) I hope it does well!!
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