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Last Breath

The gentle wind warms my old wrinkled skin As I slowly sink in the sea's soft sand The gliding flight of seabirds seen again Beyond gray contours where sea touches land Their soft silhouettes claim this final place As I silently stare into the view And find quiet edges my eyes embrace Knowing all of us are just passing through This moment of peace turns, as thoughts now come To many souls who've stood here before me And saw the same sky, heard the tides same drum Wondered of their place in life's decree As beautiful colors float in my mind I'll hope the next old soul reflects in kind written by Frederic Parker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/15/2016 8:25:00 AM
I can feel the vignette you create so well. Love your images and the spirit behind them. It's certainly a keeper. Glad to have discovered your poems
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Date: 4/25/2014 2:15:00 AM
simply beautiful a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/24/2014 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this deserving write. RAY
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:06:00 AM
Very apt perspective. Congratulations on the win, Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:15:00 AM
thank you Dr Ram for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/24/2014 7:23:00 AM
A haunting piece, congratulations!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:16:00 AM
thank you Richard for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/24/2014 5:49:00 AM
Beautiful Frederic... Congratulation on your well deserve first place win in this contest... Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Verlena for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/24/2014 1:21:00 AM
Fabulous poetry,, liked the last two concluding ones the most ,,,congrats Frederic a great win indeed !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Dr Upma for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/23/2014 11:39:00 PM
Hi Frederic, this is an awesome win... Linda
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:19:00 AM
thank you Linda my poetic friend for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/23/2014 11:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win my friend
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Tim for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/23/2014 9:55:00 PM
I really enjoyed the vivid imagery in your poem. I felt like I was viewing a painting as I was reading. Great depth in this soulful write, Frederic! Congrats on your first place win in my contest!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2014 8:25:00 AM
thank you Kelly for allowing me to enter your contest ,there were many good poems entered, mine was just one of many