An Vu Poet Free verse

Last Breath

Given two hands,
Yet those hands will never hold anything.
Given two eyes,
Yet those eyes can see nothing.
Given one heart,
Yet that heart has never known joy.

Befriended by no one,
Nor loved by anyone.
Granted nothing,
Nor possessing anything.
And so I pray for. . .
My last breath.

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Cheryl Glans November 16, 2012 at 10:25 PM Be-you-tiful <3

Connie Gildersleeve November 13, 2012 at 3:15 PM Congrats on your featured poem An. Great write. Sad.

Richard Tarr November 13, 2012 at 11:54 AM Great write I can relate

Leo Larry Amadore November 13, 2012 at 11:41 AM Congratulations on being featured this week. I appreciated your effort, as demonstrated in this posting. Keep writing and we will keep reading.

Debbie Guzzi October 25, 2012 at 5:43 PM Very sad..I wish you better days. Light & Love

Vicky Tsiluma October 6, 2012 at 12:15 PM Poignant write this! Brings out sad emotions of a life lived out in loneliness. You've brought out the theme nicely.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2012 at 9:28 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today An. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Jezabella Singe September 26, 2012 at 8:35 PM Welcome to the soup. So very sorry its under sad writing but here you can bloom as a poet and we can help with anything you don't know about. I urge you to enter this in a contest. You might be happy with the results. ~J

Dan Kearley September 26, 2012 at 11:15 AM Woha! This is quite sad? Jeepers! I'll be your friend... :o) Very nice sad write...