Nazia Sultan Poet Kimo

Last breath

POET NOTE

I wrote this poem to show how the absence of hope, support, and kindness can push people to the edge.  Many people don’t die because they are weak. They die because they feel alone and hopeless.  
As humans, we must give hope, spread positivity, and be light in someone’s darkness.  
A little care can save a life.


    Last breath 


tears and rain
grief freezes the lake
hope dies

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