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Last and Passed

A year is closed It is called, last Yet it didn't last A reminder to those Who traversed under rough weather, that those do pass. May you know how much God loves you! My sincere wishes to all for a very happy, healthy and extraordinary New Year 2012 to you and yours! God bless! CarolineCecile - 01/01/2012!

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Date: 1/4/2012 7:37:00 AM
so much depth to this wonderful poem. happy new year.. harry
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:56:00 PM
I like that. it is now called last, but it didn't last. So TRUE. It's fun to find parodoxes in words! I enjoyed this.
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Date: 1/2/2012 2:19:00 AM
Good one,well written C.C. HAPPY 2012 TO YOU. OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/2/2012 12:06:00 AM
Hi Caroline...I'm with Greg on the comma. This is a lovely yet brief gem..a neat lil package of a poem. Happy New Year to you. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/1/2012 11:17:00 PM
I liked this immensely, though I think the comma in the second line messes with the rhythm. Keep it up!
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