Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Free verse

Last and Passed

A year is closed
 It is called, last
 Yet it didn't last
 A reminder to those
 Who traversed
 under rough weather,
 that those do pass.

May you know how much God loves you!

My sincere wishes to all for a very happy, healthy and extraordinary New Year 2012 to you and yours! God bless!

CarolineCecile - 01/01/2012!

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Harry Horsman January 4, 2012 at 7:37 AM so much depth to this wonderful poem. happy new year.. harry

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2012 at 8:56 PM I like that. it is now called last, but it didn't last. So TRUE. It's fun to find parodoxes in words! I enjoyed this.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2012 at 2:19 AM Good one,well written C.C. HAPPY 2012 TO YOU. OXOX love Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song January 2, 2012 at 12:06 AM Hi Caroline...I'm with Greg on the comma. This is a lovely yet brief gem..a neat lil package of a poem. Happy New Year to you. Gwendolen

January 1, 2012 at 11:17 PM I liked this immensely, though I think the comma in the second line messes with the rhythm. Keep it up!