Larissa Laluna

The sun was sporting a radiant yellow,
with headlong pause, upon entering her space.
Tanned and serene, cheered by warm fellow,
Larissa’s slightly demure, emanating grace,
framed in the joyful shine of bittersweet tangelo.

Sungaze tints her bucolic gown, each thread,
a xanthous treat in the field of convergent reap.
The stipple wheat, its ocean of resonant red,
veils her pretty feet, as the sun gently falls asleep.
Autumn stumbles out, as Summer slips into bed.

Larissa Laluna with short crop of hair, breathes
in cooling air, the moon playfully turns her white.
The baby’s breath and roses, her sallow wreaths.
A figurine of snow, softly pirouetting at twilight.
Hope’s found in indulgent seasons she unsheathes.

Tapping on her bare shoulder, a yellow rush,
while pastel tulips color the lady’s countenance.
The bounty of seasons, Larissa’s paragon-blush.
The harvest moon, the gypsy’s discountenance
of rivers of green, blue sky, and a sunny paintbrush.

10/4/2021
Emile Pinet’s Quintain (Sicilian) Poetry Contest

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Kaufman Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Another belated congratulations Ms. Kim. This one is a fav for me, imagery is superb.
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:59 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Logan Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Captivating write, Kim. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Jenna!
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim! Such beautiful imagery is portrayed in your well-written Sicilian Quintain! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Thank you, Sandra! ~ hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Larissa Laluna" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed autumn day...................
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Pinet Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations Kim! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest called for exacting syllable counts and perfect rhymes, as requirements of this form. Well done my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Thank you so much! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Exquisite imagery Kim. Exotic too.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 10:09 AM
I enjoyed reading your very descriptive season oriented work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Strand Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 3:05 AM
Very alliterative name/title Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you!
Ellison Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Beautiful!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, dear Jack!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 1:06 AM
Very well done. I'm off contests these days. I love tangelos. We have quite a variety of citrus imported. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 3:17 AM
Thank you, dear friend! Enjoy those tangelos!
Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:25 PM
The beautiful interactions of sun and moon from day to night, and season to season, are elegantly portrayed here, with the most amazing imagery. This was delightful reading, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! ~ hugs
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Exquisitely written quatrain, Kim, I like your rhyme and these lines: A figurine of snow, softly pirouetting at twilight. Hope’s found in indulgent seasons she unsheathes. My best wishes with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
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