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Large Oaks

Ancient powerful Resisting the weathering Symbolize wisdom Nathan Bane Leccese ©All Rights Reserved 05/27/2009

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Date: 5/29/2009 5:19:00 PM
The big oaks are truly the wise ones in the forest, much like the elderly are the wise ones in population. I can see the image in this great haiku very clearly. Great write, Nate! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2009 4:36:00 PM
Interesting view of these hardy trees. The second line pulls the other two together. Keep on writing. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/29/2009 1:34:00 PM
Love this powerful haiku. A tribute well deserved to nature's strength and beauty. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/29/2009 12:05:00 PM
Super respect for the Oaks Nathan, tree's are incredible icons of the land. Strong write> James
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Date: 5/29/2009 11:41:00 AM
Loved the last line, beautiful work as always...Raul
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Date: 5/29/2009 10:50:00 AM
very well penned write. love the depth
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Date: 5/29/2009 10:46:00 AM
Love this piece..lines two and three are very strong..good writing.
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