Large Oaks

Ancient powerful
Resisting the weathering
Symbolize wisdom

Nathan Bane Leccese
©All Rights Reserved 05/27/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 5:19 PM
The big oaks are truly the wise ones in the forest, much like the elderly are the wise ones in population. I can see the image in this great haiku very clearly. Great write, Nate! Love, Carolyn
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May 29, 2009 at 4:36 PM
Interesting view of these hardy trees. The second line pulls the other two together. Keep on writing. Have a nice weekend. Karen
Winter Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Love this powerful haiku. A tribute well deserved to nature's strength and beauty. Love, Shar
Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Super respect for the Oaks Nathan, tree's are incredible icons of the land. Strong write> James
Moreno Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 11:41 AM
Loved the last line, beautiful work as always...Raul
Faulkner Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 10:50 AM
very well penned write. love the depth
Higgins Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Love this piece..lines two and three are very strong..good writing.
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