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Large Cloud

Over the sea a large cloud wafts high so white The formation so unique it looks puffy The cloud looks so beautiful and sure delights Seeing its great vastness and formed destiny It floats way up in the sky so large and true It’s a white mass poking around in the blue So soft looking the cloud exists in real form Height of the cloud is certainly not the norm
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/28/2013 12:13:00 PM
I especially love the ones that look like a big explosion... those ones are especially vivid and look very three dimensional. Awesome descriptions of the cloud! Dare I say "lofty" as well? Hehehe...
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Date: 4/27/2013 10:28:00 PM
You described it very well, Russell :) Beautiful cloud!
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Date: 4/27/2013 10:22:00 PM
I liked it too...a single cloud all alone does seem strange...and mysterious
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Date: 4/27/2013 6:01:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..I hope that it doesn't dump anything unpleasent in your area..Suppose to rain here but we need it again..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:28:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this poem Russell!I liked it.
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