Lap Of Nature - Paz

I can see the dense,quiet crowd of green
        Spreading across the Woods
               Lively and glistening 
                    Standing tall and swaying 
                        With centuries of secrets within 
 
   I was dragged deeper into the dark
     Without knowing what my soul seeks
       Completely lost in the lap of nature
         Perhaps to comprehend the secrets masked
              Though seemed real,it was all,just a dream!!





Sponsored By: Nette Onclaud
Contest title: Poetic Reply Poetry Contest
Date: 03/06/2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 9:19 AM
The winners' list holds your name as one of the winners. I am so delighted to see it there. Congratulations to you and way to go. Sara K.
Jabeen  Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 10:02 AM
I appreciate the words here.It means a lot to me. Thank you so much!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 5:49 PM
A great interpretation of the Paz poetry prompt
Jabeen  Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 3:58 AM
Thank you!!
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