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Resubmitted 8 Jul 2026 for Seth Pina's Contest

Language of Moonlight

Moonlight is my favored language It shades misty , Though cold night etches wilted boughs Raking the muddied fields-- Lean willows change into argent gold: In dripping furrows of hollowness Fragile roots and stalks Glimmer against pale weeds As tassels of orb’s voile thread Embellish autumn’s mourning grass. This is moonlight, yellowing the eve Across the stark open... In my aloneness I watch it flicker through shadow play That my essence breathes awhile -- Beams somehow speak to me about howling pain and lilting quietude; As a crescent trace draws a hint of radiance To awaken my inner poise , now ...slowly embracing the wonder of new worlds.
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Goff Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 9:18 AM
A wonder of time...one's personal time elapse...nice...jmg
May Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Moonlight has a charm all its own...Wonderful write Nette..
Anish Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Sweet poetry about lunar light here! Good luck in the contest! Yours Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Enjoyed the language of moonlight..very artistic as always..beautifully written for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:32 PM
A lovely write nette, its an amazing sight through a telescope, I felt I could reach out and touch it. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 12:54 PM
- This gives several possible range of moon color experience, beautifully written Nette - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Beautifully written Nette. Love the last stanza too! I can get pleasantly lost in this :)
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