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LANDLOCKED landlocked we stalk past pain perimeters guns rest roughly slung on shoulders hung closing behind growling within scoping targets empty claim weapons lead worlds astray cast our sins away lords of nothing eyes survey stark hearts lost © Kim van Breda—24 September 2015

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Date: 9/24/2015 3:39:00 PM
Hi Nette :) Thanks for visiting and your encouraging feedback. I am trying my hand for the first time with this "etheree" format sweeping over the soupwaves..~~X~~
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Date: 9/24/2015 3:31:00 PM
deeply written read with a meaningful message, kim.. nice to see you again.. huggs
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