Kim Van Breda Poet Etheree

Landlocked

LANDLOCKED

landlocked we stalk past pain perimeters
guns rest roughly slung on shoulders hung
closing behind growling within
scoping targets empty claim
weapons lead worlds astray
cast our sins away
lords of nothing
eyes survey
stark hearts
lost



© Kim van Breda—24 September 2015

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Kim Van Breda September 24, 2015 at 3:39 PM Hi Nette :) Thanks for visiting and your encouraging feedback. I am trying my hand for the first time with this "etheree" format sweeping over the soupwaves..~~X~~

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2015 at 3:31 PM deeply written read with a meaningful message, kim.. nice to see you again.. huggs