Landfill

Another big package arrived today!
I opened it up, and to my dismay....

Cardboard and stuffing, and so much more
Styrofoam nuggets all over the floor

There was plastic bubble, and cellophane wrap
It took a broom to clear the trash

I dug around to look inside
All sealed and tight.  No big surprise!!

It needs a battery to make it run
But the battery it came with, is dead and done!

Okay...ready again, we'll have some fun
But a broken remote! Shucks! We needed that one!

We'll take a time out....well, that's a bother!
A run to Wal Mart to get another...

Stopped at Starbuck's along the way
Tossed my cup...that's two, today

Bought more stuff...while I was there
Filled six plastic bags... or maybe it's more....

Here's some trash....fourth time today
I'll go back to Wal Mart...where I will pay

For new garbage containers...those giant cans..
'Cause we fill them up, as fast as we can!

I have heard going 'Green'...is the only way !!
Oops , here comes Fed-Ex, more to deliver today!



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K. Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 2:29 AM
Congrats on your win with this witty write, Carrie :)-- it sure is ironic that we just seem to throw so much because of all those packaging? I'm always happy to see you name in the winner's list and it sure is no wonder why... hugs, nikko :)
Guzzi Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:18 PM
yike I know those pesky cardboard boxes fill the garage!!!..very politiacally correct write! Congrads on your win! Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 7:31 AM
funny!! great write!! congrats on your well deserved win!!
Adeite Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Joe’s contest, you are such a creative poet. Please keep your creative caps on and let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Enjoy the honour. Love always, Adeleke
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. It is very true how much is wasted on packing and then just thrown away instead of being reused.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Ralph's contest. It's back to ceramics, metal, and glass! Can we do it? Or is it too inconvenient. Great poem!
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 9:16 AM
I extend my congratulations to you on your win Carrie in Joe Flach's contest "The Earl of Sandwich". Love, Carol
Flach Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:24 PM
Carrie, I loved the uniqueness of this write. And, I loved the topic and how you presented it. Also, I think the repeated line is wonderfully worked into the poem and is not forced to fit the form. Nice job. Joe
Roberts Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 10:57 AM
oh so true, congrats on your win
Mannan Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Heartiest Congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 8:32 PM
wow a real problem yes in deedie! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Joe's contest ... wonderful write ..wonderful win.. wonderful weekend... enjoy.. with luv..
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 12:07 PM
What can I say Carrie. beautiful Couplet. Agape, Moses
Horsman Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:04 AM
to make such an impact about land fill, is surely the work of a master mind, awesome absolutely, Harry
Knop Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Cool, whitty and a great write, Carrie! Too much trash all over! I hate those Styrofoam nuggets as it is so hard to get rid of the. They load up with electric magnetism and get stuck everywhere!!! Terrible stuff!!!Thank you for your comments on my poetry and have a nice week!...Gert:)
Fraser Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Cool poem on the consumable world we live in today. Your words are so true Carrie >> James
Taylor Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Excellent write, Carrie. LOL. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind words. Have a nice weekend. xxx Ralph
Mehta Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:58 PM
A nice humorous write. enjoyed it
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