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Landfall Devastation

air depression in ocean thick cloud sucked by low pressure… moisture billows up hurricane is born eye follows blindly the track … land lacerated by fall storm surge flattens things on way flood drowns the ruins… devastation batters lives ______________ December 12, 2022 Syllable count : 775, 577, 757 (HMS) Contest : Triple New Charlieku Sponsored by : Charles Messina

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Date: 1/5/2023 7:14:00 AM
So well done, Sublimal. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:49:00 PM
Too many natural mishaps lately :( Well done on these haiku's, Subimal. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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