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Land of the Lost

A new place An old face Same old same old In this game we play Same old same old It ends today Help me out, please I say Get me out, no more can we stay I love you You love me I hate you You leave me Your love is a curse Followed by pain You should drive a hearse And be followed by rain You bring me to life And then shut me down You bring me up And then toss me around Im threw with it All the lies Im done with you And your fake guilt trip Not anymore Will I be the one who cries. *written for Sarah, i hope it continues to make you happy up here*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2011 4:53:00 PM
Very creative, Jonathan..sorry about this, however, there is a "tomorrow" that may either fix this or bring you what you need. Blessings...Enjoyed this. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:31:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:02:00 AM
thank you kali, and i know you are. i dont think they are all that great, but i thank you so much.
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:42:00 AM
Jon I envy your poems on here. They're soosososooo good. iloveyou&i'm always here for you. You know that.?(:
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