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Land of Love

Last call For lonely hearts I've waited so long For you Take my hand We'll fly Together To the land of love Last call For lonely hearts You've waited so long For me Take my hand We'll laugh, love and live Together In the land of love Last Call For Lonely Hearts Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 10/30/19

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Date: 1/5/2020 9:24:00 AM
Sorry this one did not place, Timothy. The symmetry is quite lovely.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/6/2020 10:25:00 PM
No need to apologize to me. You wisdom is always correct. It does not hurt my feelings in any way. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 10/31/2019 1:20:00 PM
Hello Timothy McGuire, I like this poem. It says it all. To bad it is not a real place to go. Have a nice day my friend.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 4:54:00 PM
You too Darlene thanks!
Date: 10/31/2019 6:37:00 AM
I like the idea of the contest, and I like your entry.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 4:54:00 PM
I like you and your poetry Caren thanks
Date: 10/31/2019 5:52:00 AM
Love it. Bless you, Gina
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2019 4:54:00 PM
Same to you Gina! Thanks
Date: 10/31/2019 12:07:00 AM
Simple as it is.. I like your Land of Love..
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/31/2019 12:31:00 AM
Thank you Jenish.

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