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Land In White

I see a land completely all in white Secluded by the trees and the bushes This place is grand seeming a holy sight It’s not like snow or powder in some night The land is quietly filled with shushes I see a land completely all in white The woods holds the mystery of delight Will the fairy that made this give wishes The place is grand seeming a holy sight There are spots illuminated by light The whiteness is bright and filled with lushes I see a land completely all in white No creature here really wants to fight Glory emphatic is great in thrushes The place is grand seeming a holy sight White seems to sure make everything just right Not a plant carries or surely crushes I see a land completely all in white The place is grand seeming a holy sight
Contest: Fantasy Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 6/20/2013

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Date: 7/13/2013 9:14:00 AM
Russell, a heavenly view of this holy place in white. Superb imagery and inspirational feel. Congrats on your win in the Fantasy contest :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:00:00 AM
Russell I so enjoyed this fantasy of white. Congrats on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:03:00 PM
Very nice Russell. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/8/2013 3:40:00 PM
an awesome fantasy poem... congrats :-) love LINDA
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:20:00 AM
Russell gorgeous imagery in this lovely poem ty for entering congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:36:00 PM
what a beautiful sight, my friend
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Date: 6/20/2013 10:41:00 PM
Oh, yes, she loves the villanelle!! I need to try this too. And I'm so glad I saw your poem. I realize now that I used the wrong kind of poem for her contest. I better go remove mine right now. haha. Bye see ya later!
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Date: 6/20/2013 3:01:00 PM
this delights the imagination, russell... scenes of your whole setting brings magic to this page... oh, scintillating work as always... grreat stuff and form!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/20/2013 1:43:00 PM
The poem is grand, surely a winner!
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a place where the light is produced by someone other than man..Very creative fantasy..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always lift me up..Sara
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