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Lamppost Aglow

lamppost flickers soft inviting a slumber deep amidst taps of crystal mist. outside, skyscape flaunts its view to pinpoint evening , aglow... lamppost flickers soft. wrapped in quilt, thoughts milder gently slip by inviting a slumber deep. chants this nocturne where lullabies hover low amidst taps of crystal mist.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/25/2024 5:12:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations, Nette:) glad to have you back:)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2024 5:28:00 PM

Nette, this is lovely. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Joseph May

Date: 6/21/2024 11:23:00 AM

"Lullabies hover low" in this lovely write, Congrats on your win

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/17/2024 3:33:00 PM

Real interesting repeated phrases... brings a new meaning when ordered differently. <3 Such beauty in words! Xo

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/17/2024 1:35:00 PM

So peaceful, I am lost in the moment.

Silent One

Date: 6/17/2024 10:43:00 AM

I can see you have done an amazing poem for this contest.. You have always been good at word play and it shows here, although it is a restricted form, you have been quite poetic..

Ink Empress

Date: 6/17/2024 6:27:00 AM

Dear nette, the way you paint imagery is so picturesque and beautiful! I love especially the opening and also how youv written “wrapped in quilt, thoughts milder gently slips by inviting a slumber deep.” So deeply moving! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2024 9:42:00 PM

I love this, Nette. How are things going?