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Lamplight Moon

Lamplight moon sits watching me; watching her, through my telescope. Sister Moon floats in centrifugal dance, never becoming dizzy. When she tires, brother Sun will dance In her place, while she sleeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/14/2018 4:16:00 PM
A subtle personification that helps us understand the brotherly-sisterly relationship of the sun and the moon. Your imagination is in keen-mode, my friend, and it is appreciated.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 10:13:00 AM
Ooh, thanks so much.

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