Lamplight Moon

Lamplight moon sits watching me; watching her, through my telescope. Sister Moon floats in centrifugal dance, never becoming dizzy. When she tires, brother Sun will dance In her place, while she sleeps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 4:16 PM
A subtle personification that helps us understand the brotherly-sisterly relationship of the sun and the moon. Your imagination is in keen-mode, my friend, and it is appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Ooh, thanks so much.
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