Lamp Filling

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. May my light invite Only be strong lamp Source Holy Spirit Fed everyday Until overflow May candle prompt Touch on conscience To frame each day Bible~prayer No prayer Candle flame Now flickers Required Lamp oil Fill Inspired by Paula Swanson's contest but not an entry *Note: Click On : " About This Poem"

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/29/2011 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful spiritual piece, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2011 9:39:00 AM

I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Sara. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2011 9:59:00 PM

'way to come up with a poem for Paula's contest, sara. I think you do these diminished hexaverses a lot, right? let me see what else you have done.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 6:38:00 PM

exquisite lines Sara.. a true picture of the inner light of H.S. and Christ in one piece which is so important to us all..good luck in the contest my friend...