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Laments of the Old

LAMENTS OF THE OLD that poor, painful cry “i’ve fallen and can’t get up!” hope god will hear you this is my sickness – i want to sleep all the time my kitty don’t mind i will surely die forgot to take prescriptions it’s part of old age the house is a mess my wife saves everything blames it on the cat oh, dear lord, now what? there is a crack house next door change locks seal windows a car just went by music so loud it shook the house scared old puss in boots mortuary called bargain price on caskets it WAS a fine day i can’t control gas nor the water works either monthly bill sky high

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/19/2014 3:49:00 AM
Daver, We do indeed become as children again as we age. Need more sleep etc. but my daughter, who is a nurse, says her patients who can't remember they were unhappy, sing and enjoy life, so she lets them enjoy. When they call for their mates, she says they will be back soon, even though they have passed on, and they accept that joyfully. I feel the most unfair part of aging is you can't get your body to do what you want it to anymore. I enjoyed your poem and could certainly relate. hugs, Connie
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:16:00 PM
Can relate to these, Daver: Another is who is that old person in then mirror. I used to be so lithe, pretty and upbeat.....time is the cruelest phenomenon......no one can beat it..... Smile...it's all we can do.. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:15:00 PM
oh these are brilliant, love the casket one,,cheap while alive, then death like christmas toys, they double the price,,just love the irony
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Date: 8/17/2014 11:23:00 AM
oh my oh my oh my. Sounds horrible. I loved the part that your wife blames the house condition on the cats. Get up and help her work. hahahaha.
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Date: 8/17/2014 11:23:00 AM
the first one VERY good. the sarcasm of it.
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