Laments, Lady of Charlotte, To Lancelot

In the garbage lilies may bloom
Yet in its odor will always loom
Faint traces of its abused past
Wounds may fade but traces last

Had heaven pity on this fool
And struck her down dead where she lay
That she did not see another day
Mourned in loss and wasted away

If I tore out these eyes of mine
And blinded to the sight divine
That caught my eyes, I will not sin
By yearning love not mine to keep

When I first tasted love’s venom
How enflamed passions burnt anew
Love pulsed through my soul, a fiery hue
Yet overcomes now solemn Fate, 
I am innocent no more.
I will ne’er be what I was before

I depart now, wretched heart
From the remainders of my waste
In hopes that in my death regain
What love I sought and sought in vain

Your lady fair sure owns your heart
Yet your remorse mine for evermore
In the shadows I will meet thee
In your darkest hours to greet thee
Midst deadly silence, fancies free me
Whisper, but my name, you’ll see me…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 3, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Good job excellent
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November 16, 2010 at 6:51 PM
Thank you for your comments and the opportunity to begin reading your poetry. I enjoyed the rhythm and flow and "wounds may fade but traces last". What a truth those words hold.
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November 6, 2010 at 8:56 AM
you are clearly an experienced poet. along with gifted. you see love as it really is a monster. john h loving iii
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June 4, 2010 at 10:02 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Hyunjin. Love, Carol
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