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Laments For a King

My heart aches sorrowed Over the death of King San My poems shed tears As my hands wipe dead King's feet With Shinji's virgin water Tanka Tears - Poetry Contest Sponsor Rick Parise Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 8th February, 2015

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Date: 2/20/2015 3:59:00 PM
I would love to hear more of this - is it a true story? Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
well done..PD
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:55:00 PM
Rajat, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:16:00 PM
Back again to congratulate on your win. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:33:00 AM
Beautifully penned - many congrats Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/9/2015 10:48:00 AM
This is another masterpiece, Rajat! It is such a brilliant lamentation. Bravo. Pandita
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Date: 2/8/2015 7:03:00 PM
beautiful, Rajat. blessings Eve
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Date: 2/8/2015 12:38:00 PM
Wow nice one rajat... best wishes..
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