Lament of a Soul Without a Valentine

love stays away for some even if you are born on feb 14th
    It eludes you even in childhood if your mother loves your brother more,
    It eludes you even among siblings if your brother loves your sister more,
    It eludes you even in schools if your teacher loves your other friend more,
    It eludes you even in college if your boyfriend loves your friend more,
    It eludes you even in work place when your boss loves your colleague more,
    It eludes you even in life when your husband loves another woman more,
    It eludes you even if your children love your husband more,
    It eludes you even if your extended family loves your children more,
    It eludes you when it loves your aged self than your youth more..
    May be god loved me so wanted all my attention to him more…sunkan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/16/2010 8:51:00 AM
thanku helen, i am new here and find it a little tough to navigate and locate the poems so once i got there the first thing i started reading and commenting, am very happy to read your comment here, it is like cheering your thoughts...sunkan
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Date: 12/16/2010 6:23:00 AM
Very expressive yet beautiful in it's presumed truths. I will be reading more of your poems Sundari. Have a great time over the festive season and thank you for your comment and taking time to read my work. I appreciate your kind views and thoughts, Hel.
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
sure carol, wish you also a very warm and happy holiday...sunkan
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Sundari. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:18:00 PM
thanku fabiyas nice to see you appreciating here...sunkan
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:41:00 AM
A nice write on love,Sundari.
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:11:00 AM
Thanku michael, very happy to see you here my friend...sunkan
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:10:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts on love in this write.. well written my friend....
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