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Lament For Greta

LAMENT FOR GRETA Her reaction was spontaneous as of youth With emotion’s certainty near tangible Sought to patronize and brook no other truth Revelation that she knew must be infallible Through the portal of the ether her word spread She would navigate with skill above her league Little known beyond fixation in her head She was just a puppet in a great intrigue Twelve years on should Earth still flourish spite all strife Will she bless not curse that vapour that brings life

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Date: 2/2/2020 11:27:00 AM
I see this is a win. Its quite intriguing. I wish I could have gotten inspired to have written a poem with those words!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/8/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Your muse unusually reticent in this case?
Date: 1/31/2020 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/2/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda.
Date: 1/31/2020 12:53:00 PM
Nice thought provoking write Geoffrey, thanks for entering, and congrats on a nice placement!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/1/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for the response and the placement, John.
Date: 1/28/2020 9:20:00 PM
Good question! We can ask the same question of the redoubtable 'AOC' here in America. Thanks, Geoffrey. :) Gershon
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/1/2020 7:51:00 AM
Yes, indeed, Gershon. Ask the right question and......Thanks for your feedback.

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