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Lambent Love

lonesome lark sings in cornfields lambent love ignites the night a secret beat our hearts skip you kiss with your eyes

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/21/2023 7:32:00 AM

Ooh…kissing with the eyes…love the first line - we usually think of crows in the cornfield but you’ve placed a lark. Fave

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2023 6:08:00 AM

what a beautiful romantic piece Debjani:-) hugs Jan xx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 5:26:00 AM

Such a romantic and love hued dodoitsu this is! The alliteration flow is so mellifluous along with gorgeous imageries, I really love the opening with "lonesome lark sings in cornfields lambent love ignites the night" How melancholy turned to saccharine memory.. So beautiful :) best of luck for the contest!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/21/2023 5:29:00 AM

Thanks Hiya,