Lamb

The young lamb arose Shaky damp from mothers Womb seeking milk It wobbled and plots its path Not yet seeing but Moms tongue tickles His bum and guides him Warm satisfaction milk Strength begins to flood This weary little soul And now a new life will Cascade him into the World adventurer at best

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Marugu Mo

Date: 7/10/2024 9:36:00 AM

Reminds me of a younger me. grew up on a small farm surrounded by sheep, goats cattle and donkeys. enjoyed

Kelli White
Date: 7/10/2024 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Mr mo. I am still surrounded by animals, 3 macaws, 7 cats and a dog.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/2/2024 1:55:00 PM

aww so cute and so descriptive - I love the image of the mother tickling his bum to guide him to the milk - its so true i had the same thing with my baby goats lol:-)hugs jan xx

Kelli White
Date: 7/6/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much, growing up on farms my whole life birth of animals is a huge blessing