Lakeshore

Peaceful...surging waves,
Softly kiss the edge of land:
As the sun beds down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:25 AM
Wonderful Haiku Raul>>James
Higgins Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 5:54 AM
As the sun beds down?..Raul..it is criminal that you keep on dropping these haiku bombs...awesome line..awesome work yet again.
Winter Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 5:52 AM
So peaceful. I hear the sigh of the waves and see the beauty of the sunset. Again, I want to be there. Exquisite! Love, Shar
Goff Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 2:47 AM
just perfect! Jim
Strand Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 12:27 AM
Lovely sunset image you capture Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Leccese Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 10:08 PM
"Softly kiss the edge of land" Your descriptions are amazing Raul! I love it. Nate
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