Lakeshore

Peaceful...surging waves, Softly kiss the edge of land: As the sun beds down.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2009 10:25:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Raul>>James

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/15/2009 5:54:00 AM

As the sun beds down?..Raul..it is criminal that you keep on dropping these haiku bombs...awesome line..awesome work yet again.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/15/2009 5:52:00 AM

So peaceful. I hear the sigh of the waves and see the beauty of the sunset. Again, I want to be there. Exquisite! Love, Shar

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/15/2009 2:47:00 AM

just perfect! Jim

Brian Strand

Date: 6/15/2009 12:27:00 AM

Lovely sunset image you capture Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/14/2009 10:08:00 PM

"Softly kiss the edge of land" Your descriptions are amazing Raul! I love it. Nate