Lake Snow

When snow falls like leaves through liquid
Sunshine abstractions slow on lakes recline
Soundless for the first time in their tiny lives
Cold but never bitter as they drift
That is when light lifts them bold
To fill in the missing particles
Sparkled in their turn as they float down
Transformed translucence as a mystery
There to blend in with waters of the lake
Carried off without mistake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 16, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful piece :) xomo!
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October 16, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Good morning Maureen, Thank you! I appreciate your comments and I am very happy that you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day and please, for your sake and mine, try to have lots of fun. Take care. Earl
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