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''Lake Side With Birch Trees''

I could look at this painting
      forever, oh Klimt was a talent!
Lake side with birch trees is where I would like to be,
      beside the dappled blue still water . . . 
        I would pick yellow buttercups,
bluebells and purple larkspur growing wild, oh beautiful;
        Oh dream,
          so sublime.

    Klimt has taken me away
      to a serene place in my mind.
What a divine green dream of nature in tranquility,
      but the painting-  I must leave;
        I think the gallery would miss it . . . 
But, when days are rainy and I am forlorn, I must go;
        to view,
          beauty painted.

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November 21, 2017



Submitted to Premiere Contest 16,
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Horne Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 12:52 PM
love this, my friend - & love the pic too xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Constance, I sure would love to be in the place this painting depicts. You painted it beautifully. Soupmail.
La France Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Andrea, thank you. I just love the art gallery, it really does inspire me to write my poetry, I always go with my journal and pen ready !
Krampe Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:26 PM
Lovely painting and lovely poem.
La France Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Agnes, thank you for the lovely !
Sands Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Very nice BW! Thank you for sharing this :)
La France Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Heidi, thank you.
Raynes Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Could spend all day in this gallery, beautiful.
La France Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Lewis, thank you for the beautiful, oh yes, me too all day !
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