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lake of life hiku

interstellar d u s t s c i n t i l l a t e s with zealous s p a r k s ~ atop lake of life...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2025 7:41:00 AM

These patterns are becoming so popular. Did this get a win? Hope so, Ink!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thank you yes i think so appreciate your congrats sweet andrea.

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/22/2025 4:55:00 PM

A sheet of diamond prism sparkle silently covers the Cosmos restless in the in ageless revelation that Time is a reincarnation of Day...J.A.B.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Justin

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/22/2025 10:39:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "hiku"write. Have a fun day writing away..........

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thank you dear paula, grateful

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/22/2025 4:41:00 AM

Hello Ink, this is another beautiful Haiku. So dreamy. Have wonderful day my friend.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 1:05:00 PM

So kind of you, thank you so much dear zyrool

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/22/2025 3:15:00 AM

I love the" interstellar dust". What a mesmerizing imagery!! Congratulations Ink. Keep shining. ^___^ JCB

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 1:05:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much! Always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2025 2:33:00 AM

As long as its dust. More worried on large asteroids. Brilliant haiku. Always light.

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 5/21/2025 11:02:00 PM

Interstellar dust!! Wow!! Absolute astral beauty papi…stunning haiku.. lake of life .. mmmmmmm!… the way u breathe life through a few lines…. Gorgeous!!

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 5/21/2025 9:53:00 PM

Another one . Awesome

Paige Hind

Date: 5/21/2025 9:51:00 PM

Very beautiful, as always- <3 enjoy your haikus so much, you pack so much in with those three short lines

Robert James Liguori

Date: 5/21/2025 9:34:00 PM

This is the world’s greatest hiku!!! I love how you break up your lines. And lake of life is brilliant. A super read. Fave for me.