Ink Empress Poet Haiku

lake of life hiku

interstellar d    u
                    s 
                       t
s c i n t
    i l l a 
     t e 
       s  with zealous s p
                                      a
                                       r    k  s ~
      atop    lake   of    life...

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Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2025 at 7:41 AM These patterns are becoming so popular. Did this get a win? Hope so, Ink! Ink Empress May 23, 2025 at 1:04 PM Thank you yes i think so appreciate your congrats sweet andrea.

Justin Bordner May 22, 2025 at 4:55 PM A sheet of diamond prism sparkle silently covers the Cosmos restless in the in ageless revelation that Time is a reincarnation of Day...J.A.B. Ink Empress May 23, 2025 at 1:04 PM Thank you, Justin

Paula Goldsmith May 22, 2025 at 10:39 AM I enjoyed reading your creative/fun "hiku"write. Have a fun day writing away.......... Ink Empress May 23, 2025 at 1:04 PM Thank you dear paula, grateful

Zyrool Gifford May 22, 2025 at 4:41 AM Hello Ink, this is another beautiful Haiku. So dreamy. Have wonderful day my friend. Ink Empress May 23, 2025 at 1:05 PM So kind of you, thank you so much dear zyrool

JC Brul May 22, 2025 at 3:15 AM I love the" interstellar dust". What a mesmerizing imagery!! Congratulations Ink. Keep shining. ^___^ JCB Ink Empress May 23, 2025 at 1:05 PM Awwn thank you so much! Always

Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2025 at 2:33 AM As long as its dust. More worried on large asteroids. Brilliant haiku. Always light.

Lioness Onpaper May 21, 2025 at 11:02 PM Interstellar dust!! Wow!! Absolute astral beauty papi…stunning haiku.. lake of life .. mmmmmmm!… the way u breathe life through a few lines…. Gorgeous!!

The Aura Rhymes May 21, 2025 at 9:53 PM Another one . Awesome

Paige Hind May 21, 2025 at 9:51 PM Very beautiful, as always- <3 enjoy your haikus so much, you pack so much in with those three short lines

Robert James Liguori May 21, 2025 at 9:34 PM This is the world’s greatest hiku!!! I love how you break up your lines. And lake of life is brilliant. A super read. Fave for me.