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Lake Lurker

Sun loud No cloud Pack up Meet up Split, Blue Come too Up hill Splash, chill In lake Dark shape! Swim still? Lost thrill Leg? Fin? Not in! Cretin? Eaten! Float, creek Sprung leak! Big scare Hiss air Leak get All wet In drink Bat sink! It’s grim Can’t swim Gat found Hang down Stop, clown! Get down! Be fair, She’s scared From tree Gat see Strange beast Friends feast Just then Shelled friend Showed head And said On back! Land tack To shore Thank more New plan Dry land!

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Date: 3/9/2022 8:43:00 PM
Jeff, you are really, really good at these. I can sit for a long time and never come up with a single rhyme like this! Good job, my friend. I enjoyed it.
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