Lake Friendship

I went to my bed to cry, I weep in my pillow all day thinking about why I get hurt so much.

The tears are making it very hard to see life in front of me. I don’t want to change for anyone

I just want to be me. Is there something wrong with me? I have no idea. I ran to the lake to cry, 

I dazed at the sky and it instantly started to pour. I covered my eyes and dropped to the ground 

I’m screaming out loud but nobody is here for me… do you ever feel that way? I feel alone, the lake

is my only friend that I can come to anytime. The rain makes me feel better when it pours over me

and makes me feel special. I stopped crying, when I stopped the sun started to instantly shine. I put

my hands in the lake and said ‘’ thanks for being there for me when I need someone to cry to’’ I said
It in a crying whisper. A tear fell from my cold cheek and dropped into the lake, it started to change its

color when. I saw it, it made me change too… I leaned over the lake and said ‘’ I need to be with you ‘’ 

I cried when I seen my own reflection. I said ‘’ goodbye world, we will become one again ‘’ I pushed 

into the lake now we are one, one with the world, one with nature, last but not least one with you. 

now I float away, live to cry day by day, all is well when I passed away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/19/2016 12:10:00 AM
I was moved by your poem, Davontay. SKAT
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