Notes About The Poem

Lake

Dusk
Ripples all gone
Silence broken
Crickets frozen songs
Darkness above
As below
Now
Where I am in repose
Quite quite dead
An unmoving
Story
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:38 AM
beautiful image and imagery but I agree with Tim there is an air of intense loneliness and sadness in your words:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Story of me life
Nance Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Freakin' brilliant yo, i love it!
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:42 PM
You are a genius!
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:47 PM
very melancholy. I feel a solitariness and a faint bit of sadness....beautiful
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:41 PM
and no ice, no hockey!
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