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lake

Written: July 23, 2026 for a contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin 
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lake ripples shimmer
summer's glow, a golden shade~
cenopath beckons

lightriverhaiku

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2026 at 11:24 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2026 at 7:16 PM

Back with congrats. Thanks for my win in your wonderful haiku contest you hosted

Tania Kitchin

August 2, 2026 at 2:57 PM

Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely lake haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2026 at 2:02 AM

Wonderful, Sotto

Valsa George

July 26, 2026 at 1:16 AM

When the sun is about to die, the sky turns golden and so colorful. The last line is the crux of your haiku. A beautiful one. The image and the haiku - both stand apart.

Victor Buhagiar

July 24, 2026 at 1:49 AM

It is excellent that we should remember the dearly departed who have not been found. Best for a win.

Paige Hind

July 23, 2026 at 8:43 PM

beautiful, Sotto

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 23, 2026 at 1:28 PM

Wonderful nature images are evoked by this amazing poem! I enjoyed both the picture and the haiku. Good luck with the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith

July 23, 2026 at 12:47 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative haiku "lake" write with your pretty picture. Oh yes, summer is aglow. "Good Luck" I did, "river." Have a wonderful day writing away................

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 23, 2026 at 12:05 PM

- A beautiful haiku, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

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